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    dots Submission Name: why... (save me)dots
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    Author: dark figure
    ASL Info:    17/m/uk
    Elite Ratio:    4.19 - 66/74/29
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       some one be there for me hold me when i cry this was writen a long time ago


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    dotswhy... (save me)dots
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    my head is pulcing
    i feel theese veins popping
    insane rage... i cant control
    i sit in my room, i cry
    i think... i am getting used used to this
    wish i fucking wasnt
    dosent matter i tell my self as i look at the masterpeice on my arm
    your all going to burn in the pits of hell
    i cast my spell
    im falling
    i think im lost
    why do i never get saved
    why....




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      WOW. Been there, that's for sure! "carving up a masterpiece on your arm, to bleed yourself free" it's from cliché, I think you'd like it, I think it's probabily the one I wrote that everybody who's read it likes, received more comments than any of my others. Oh, and nobody but you can save yourself, sorry man. I do understand, and this is a fair aquisition of such. Save yourself, or die trying; that's how it is. Hope you'd better now man. Drop the word if need be! peace
    | Posted on 2006-10-15 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      WOW. Been there, that's for sure! "carving up a masterpiece on your arm, to bleed yourself free" it's from cliché, I think you'd like it, I think it's probabily the one I wrote that everybody who's read it likes, received more comments than any of my others. Oh, and nobody but you can save yourself, sorry man. I do understand, and this is a fair aquisition of such. Save yourself, or die trying; that's how it is. Hope you'd better now man. Drop the word if need be! peace
    | Posted on 2006-10-15 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]


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