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    dots Submission Name: Do You?dots
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    Author: heidi
    ASL Info:    18/f/ireland
    Elite Ratio:    2.04 - 10/33/19
    Words: 285
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 645
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    Description:
       You're all probably getting fed up of poems about the same guy I've written a lot of poems about(Robert), but he is really where a lot of my heart and emotion lie and I feel it's easiest to write when I'm thinking of him.

    Let me know what you think. . . . x x x


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    dotsDo You?dots
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    Do you know how it feels
    for me inside?
    Do you know how it's hurt
    since the day that you died?
    Do you hear what I say
    or know how you're missed?
    Do you know how badly
    I long for your kiss?

    Do you know you're an angel
    the same as before?
    Do you know how my heart bleeds
    and how it's so sore?
    Do you watch over me
    as I pray that you do?
    Do you still have that charm
    that made me fall for you?

    Do you know that you're my idol?
    I admire your strength,
    Do you know how you're so perfect
    from each and every length?
    Do you know that you're my muse
    the reason behind why I write,
    Do you know you're face, your beaming smile
    is my last thought each and every night?

    Do you know that I'm sorry
    for not being there?
    Do you forgive me despite that
    and know that I care?
    Do you see me when I'm lonely
    and need you around?
    Do you wish you could talk to me
    and save me from frowns?

    Do you listen to me
    when I speak out to you?
    Do you keep me in your thoughts?
    as I do with you,
    Do you know that I love you
    and miss you so much?
    Do you know how I long
    for your wonderful touch?

    Do you know that tonight
    I'll be dreaming of you?
    Do you know how I wish
    my dreams will come true?
    As I close my eyes each night
    and see your smile again,
    I know you will be welcoming me
    and look forward to seeing you then.




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      how beautiful... it seriously is very amazing... dont feel bad for writing the same over and over again, i admire you for having the strength to write about someone you love and lost i feel the same i just cant bring myself to write about it it hurts so bad... but thank you
    | Posted on 2006-09-25 00:00:00 | by naynay9_90 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is beautiful work. I feel the pain that one would feel if they lost someone so dear, and I feel the love in every single word. I absolutely love this piece, no need to apologize!
    | Posted on 2006-09-24 00:00:00 | by black_beauty18 | [ Reply to This ]
      Don't apologize for writing about one person over and over! I think that if he is the reason you write, then he is who you should write about. I can sense that it's true emotion though.
    | Posted on 2006-09-24 00:00:00 | by Lynda | [ Reply to This ]
      hmm very good lyrics. Did someone you know pass away? or go away... ? :| depressing.

    -- Jason Clement
    | Posted on 2006-09-24 00:00:00 | by Jason_Clement | [ Reply to This ]


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