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    dots Submission Name: The Reason I Trydots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsThe Reason I Trydots
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    Isn't obvious,
    that the only reason I try,
    Lies beneath the tongues
    Of the people I wished died;
    That's how I feel sometimes
    In times of anger and pain left aside,
    I feel the terror of this era,
    In times like these I wished,
    I lived forever
    It Came to me
    That we always tend to call life a struggle
    What an irony
    When it tends to relate to all our troubles
    Paid the price myself,
    For thinking out this bubble.

    That's why I try,
    So that the glimpse of eyes,
    Don't touch me physically
    And people who once denied
    That indeed I tried
    Will ge it eventually.




    Submitted on 2006-09-24 20:32:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      im proud of u it makes me happy to see people that went through hard times and still have strength to write. i havent seen one writing that i disliked, thanx sexy let all the negative out stay good and the positive will come ;)
    | Posted on 2006-09-25 00:00:00 | by Ani | [ Reply to This ]
      um good poetry i really like that one, i guess when you can relate to someone elses poems you dont feel alone.. i felt that with this poem..
    wat was behind writing this, do you mind if i
    ask?
    | Posted on 2006-09-25 00:00:00 | by naynay9_90 | [ Reply to This ]


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