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    dots Submission Name: love.dots

    Author: BrokenxPieces
    ASL Info:    14/f
    Elite Ratio:    1.92 - 9/16/17
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    its such a short word
    but one with so much meaning

    one that will either complete us
    or tore us apart
    make us enjoy our lives
    or make our lives miserable

    any way it is
    love will change our lives
    making every second of it memorable
    always making it count.

    always u will remeber
    the ones that uve loved
    they will be there forever
    though others may come

    until the one day
    u find that one person
    that changes the meaning of love
    either for the bad or the good

    though love may be cruel
    its something thats so special
    the way you feel
    when youre around the one u love

    how u want to be by them
    forever and on
    the feelings you get
    could never be explained

    love is short word
    but one with so much meaning.
    meanings that can not be explained
    ones so special and true.

    Submitted on 2006-09-24 20:34:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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