Description: This piece needs help so feel free to tear it apart. I know what I want to say, I just can't get it written right.
Your Words -------------------------------------------
The connection is there between us
Without saying the words
I know where we stand
When you love someone this much
Actions speaks louder than words
I see it in the times you place me first
When you wait on me to get ready
How you give up the occasional game
Being there when it is important
Letting me be right, well sometimes
I see it in how you look at me
That smile to let me know it is all ok
The face that makes me laugh
Eyes that show your full attention
Intriguing looks for that special plan
I feel it in the many touches that we share
The kiss on forehead when Iím almost asleep
Hugs before a brief parting, after a reuniting
The grab when no one else is looking
A cuddle that makes me all warm inside
Just knowing the feelings that you invoke
I feel, makes our connection even stronger
The words do not have to come
For me to know in my heart
Where we are and how you stand
Love for an individual can be difficult to describe on paper but you have captured your feelings toward this individual quite well.
You mix free verse with the occasional ryhming sentence and that is fine. I think you need to find your own style. Speaking about feelings of love of another requires the unrestricted flow which is what free verse is all about.
I enjoyed your work and look forward to more of it.