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    dots Submission Name: leaves in autumndots
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    Author: dax
    ASL Info:    35 male BC Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.87 - 127/127/42
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 153
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 512



    Description:
       a brief star glitters like gold and is soon spent, like our life.
    for my friends grandma


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    dotsleaves in autumndots
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    Cool and crisp the northern winds,
    as it hails a time of change and slumber,
    with natures clock that slowly ticks,
    to dim eyes seeking rest.
    From lush to withered colours change,
    evidence of their demise,
    hanging on with precious life,
    until the very end.
    As the wind stoutly blows it's mournful cry,
    the final strand breaks to this world.
    Drifting in sleep upon death's breeze,
    to where the tombstone stands.





    Submitted on 2006-09-25 01:03:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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