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    dots Submission Name: Thank youdots
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    Author: Tom110989
    ASL Info:    18/m/Belgium
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 35/55/21
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
    Total Views: 82
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 401



    Description:
       This is a poem I wrote for my mom.
    She died 5/9/2006 ...
    This is just something I had to do.


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    dotsThank youdots
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    Thank you

    Thank you
    For everything
    You did
    To make me happy

    The way you fought
    Made me proud
    You did well
    Raising your kids

    You made sure
    That whatever happened
    I’d be fine
    When you’re gone

    That I’d be happy
    Was you’re dying wish
    Thanks to you
    I’ll be fine




    Submitted on 2006-09-25 09:41:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hi tom...
    I don't know what to say. I know you, and I know how you feel. I feel it's appreciable that you wrote a poem, it is a form of expression unparalleled, it takes out the swamp in the mind and makes it accessible to one and all. I almost cried at the last line...It's something that's just too profound to be expressed in words...
    Take care my friend!
    I'll always be there for you...
    Love,
    Mihir
    | Posted on 2006-10-03 00:00:00 | by mihir | [ Reply to This ]
      This sounds like a very sad situation. I am very sorry for your loss. This is a good way to get out some feelings and help you to find some closure. I am glad that you were able to post it here and I hope that others reading it, and sharing words with you will help you heal.

    God Bless!

    Monica
    | Posted on 2006-09-26 00:00:00 | by mon28 | [ Reply to This ]



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