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    dots Submission Name: Bound and Bindingdots
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    Author: nephthys
    ASL Info:    17/F/U.S.A
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 10/6/6
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Bound and Binding
    binding bound
    up the winding staircase round and round
    see the prince newly crowned
    bound and binding
    binding bound
    the jester frowned
    as the crowd began to surround
    killing the prince newly crowned
    chaos runs amuck as people fall to the ground
    drinking the blood of the dead prince newly crowned
    can you hear the sound?
    the sound of the revelers laughter as they, in mirth, roll around
    covered in their dead soveriegn's blood, as they become more and more unwound
    watch as they are slowly drowned
    drowned in the blood of their dead prince newly crowned
    then, silence profound
    as the jester, with a slight grin, picks up the crown from the blood stained ground




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