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    dots Submission Name: Renolds Music Storedots
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    Author: freak_like_me
    ASL Info:    20/female/Ireland
    Elite Ratio:    4.81 - 120/118/49
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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    Description:
       Wrote this one day when I went to the music shop on my dinner break from college, I was looking for a 12 string to play my i clept eyes on the Takamine. The sound of the guitar wooed me so much that my creativity began to run onto the page.


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    dotsRenolds Music Storedots
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    Like 1000 angels singing their harmony in composition
    Millions of sedative sensations creep along my nerve endings
    Innuendos of a hundred different vibrations
    Run through the senses

    Such a powerful entity
    Overcomes all control fields of one guitarists body

    From that moment in time
    Amongst the congregation of wood
    The 12 string Takamine, she stood

    Pressing ones finger onto the board
    Overcame the concept of even owning this creature

    I know it wont be mine...
    ...anyway

    Il come again another day

    Just to play that guitar




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