i wish there was a simple button
*poof* and im gone
but there isnt
i have to deal with this idiotic day to day
why do i have to pay?
its not my doing
not my faults
ive done nothing wrong
dammit leave me be
i just want to hide but they keep telling me dont
i like this. because its really effortless, which is bad and good. bad because its poorly constructed, but also good because it is poorly constructed. does that make sense? as in, what you have written would be a contradiction if you had made it well structured and worded better. You're saying, you want to be 'gone' and don't want to 'have to deal with this idiotic day to day', so there is no point in trying to make your poem sound good. which, i think, is what actually makes it good. i don't know if you meant for that effect, or if you even put that much thought into writing this, but it's the way it made me feel when i read it. top banana.