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    dots Submission Name: Made It From The Dirtdots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsMade It From The Dirtdots
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    They say those who make it from the bottom,
    Never get to see the top
    That even though a tender soul has fallen
    Their struggles never seem to stop.

    Unfortunately, assuming it's true,
    People try to silence reality,
    That's why the truth can seem misconstrued
    Not acknowlodging the problem's gravity.

    Sometimes one's ambition may hurt,
    It unravels perhaps since birth,
    And even though the nature of life is short
    We fail to see those who aroused,
    And made it from the dirt.





    Submitted on 2006-09-26 14:48:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like it! I like the message and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Thanks for a great poem!

    Lisa
    | Posted on 2006-11-27 00:00:00 | by Lisa-Marie | [ Reply to This ]
      Realistic. Very realistic with a very good message. The rhyming is very good and the poem flows. The topic is very sensitive but you handled it well. More then well. Keep it up :-)
    | Posted on 2006-09-28 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]


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