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Cut


Author: LossOfHope03
ASL Info:    16/female/USA
Elite Ratio:    5.76 - 30 /29 /31
Words: 180
Class/Type: Poetry /Cutting or Mutilation
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Cut



I tell myself it’ll be all right
Just one more cut and I’ll say goodnight.
But this nightmare just won’t end
I’m a danger to myself and to my friends.
Everyone is gone and there’s no where left to turn.
When the days become nights
I can’t tell because its all a fucking blur.

I’ll have the scars forever
But when the blade slices across my skin
I can see some light filter in like one day it’ll be okay.
I won’t have to constantly say “I need to be alone.”
Because when that happens I don’t feel alone.
I can feel the eyes watching me on the other side of the door.
But the love this blade gives doesn’t make me feel like I can’t take it anymore.
There’s a love like no other.
A breathable moment where I feel just fine.
Like coming up for a breath of air.
A small panic that just slips away.
No one can take that away from me.
Its what I want and its what I am.




Submitted on 2006-09-26 17:32:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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