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i love him


Author: ladiesplanet1
ASL Info:    23.cali baby
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i love him so much. its so hrd. i feel as if he doesnt feel the same and it hurts. sometimes i know he loves me. othertimes its harder to tell. he said that sometimes he doesnt like me. i'm sorry. i try so hard to be what he wants me to be. he wants me to be myself. i'm trying. i dont even know who myself is. i wish i knew. if i did, things would be so much easier. its so hard. i dont know how to feel. im so in love but so confused. dont think about anything except him anymore. i do something swrong and i think of what he will think when i tell him.


i love him



i told him that i love him
all he said was, "fuck you"
what else can i do now
except for feel so blue
my life falls to pieces
i'm dying inside
the tears are now streaming
i'm sorry. i tried
how do i change this
what now can i say
i gave you my all
now i feel so gray
please just be happy
i try to see the light
i know things get hard
but you'll be alright
things will get better
for you now at least
i'm really not that bad
its just my inner beast
i try hard to do things
that you want me to
please try to hear me
when i say i love you
i mean it in my heart
i'll say it right now
i love you my honey
what should i allow
should i let you be with me
when you're not okay
or should we start over
some other day




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  I think this is a poem that all girls can relate to and sympathise with you about. The best thing to do is move on, I know it’s hard, it was for me too, but as soon as you're over them you realise they really aren't worth your love and tears.

Linzi xx
| Posted on 2006-10-13 00:00:00 | by Linzi | [ Reply to This ]
  last year i felt what was written in the this poem. I loved someone to the point it hurt and in return..i got [censored]ed. I liked this poem alot.

Lady D
| Posted on 2006-10-02 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]
  The same thing happened to me not to long ago, and I've moved on with my life
lizzie
good write
| Posted on 2006-09-28 00:00:00 | by angeldust | [ Reply to This ]


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