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    dots Submission Name: The horse and his riderdots
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    Author: eagle wing
    ASL Info:    15/m/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 29/34/24
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe horse and his riderdots
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    "the horse and his rider

    who ride without care

    through the eyes of those

    who gaze every where

    but advice to those

    who tend to stare

    you can not see

    what isnít there"




    Submitted on 2006-09-27 18:33:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nice poem, I would chang [u] to you though and [advise] to advice :)
    | Posted on 2006-09-27 00:00:00 | by Daniel_moore | [ Reply to This ]


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