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    Author: Wolfeye_666
    ASL Info:    14/M/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    6.53 - 140/112/21
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 192
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 539



    Description:
       Ok thats a first in a long time, I hope it sounds good


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

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    Sitting in a class,
    Next to a lovely girl
    Thinking of her
    And trying to think
    What she is thinking,

    Wondering if ever he'd have a chance,
    Asking himself
    If it's worth a try,
    Or if it's only a short loving,

    But no
    If I'm writing this,
    And if I'm puzzling myself with this
    This means that I do care,
    I must do it
    For the reason that I think it's worth a try,
    And it's worth my heart...




    Submitted on 2006-09-27 20:58:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Kevin
    It sure is good to see you writing and posting again
    I missed seeing you around
    I hope everything is going well with you and for your family
    This is a clever write that I really liked
    I liked a lot how you flipped from you looking at the girl to another person looking at the girl
    To me this is a away of uniting your body with your inner conscience so that a right decision can be made
    Very Clever indeed Kevin
    God Bless
    Ron

    And Please if you get a chance I just put up two new writes if you get a chance can you let me know what you think Please
    Thank You
    Your Friend
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-10-12 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Sweet poem. Honestly. I've encountered this many times. But what if your heart is crushed? lol it's weird how we over react to such simple things...

    Anyway, keep it up...

    -- Jason Clement
    | Posted on 2006-09-27 00:00:00 | by Jason_Clement | [ Reply to This ]



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