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Author: Wolfeye_666
ASL Info:    14/M/Canada
Elite Ratio:    6.53 - 140 /112 /21
Words: 81
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Ok thats a first in a long time, I hope it sounds good


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Sitting in a class,
Next to a lovely girl
Thinking of her
And trying to think
What she is thinking,

Wondering if ever he'd have a chance,
Asking himself
If it's worth a try,
Or if it's only a short loving,

But no
If I'm writing this,
And if I'm puzzling myself with this
This means that I do care,
I must do it
For the reason that I think it's worth a try,
And it's worth my heart...




Submitted on 2006-09-27 20:58:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Kevin
It sure is good to see you writing and posting again
I missed seeing you around
I hope everything is going well with you and for your family
This is a clever write that I really liked
I liked a lot how you flipped from you looking at the girl to another person looking at the girl
To me this is a away of uniting your body with your inner conscience so that a right decision can be made
Very Clever indeed Kevin
God Bless
Ron

And Please if you get a chance I just put up two new writes if you get a chance can you let me know what you think Please
Thank You
Your Friend
Ron
| Posted on 2006-10-12 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
  Sweet poem. Honestly. I've encountered this many times. But what if your heart is crushed? lol it's weird how we over react to such simple things...

Anyway, keep it up...

-- Jason Clement
| Posted on 2006-09-27 00:00:00 | by Jason_Clement | [ Reply to This ]


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