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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 290
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    im sick of watchin u smile
    while im sheding a tear
    what made you so damn special
    ur no betta than any other guy i know
    how many times have u fucked me ova
    did u eva really care
    im soo sick of ur bullshit
    and ur childish little lies
    im not fuckin stupid
    get out of my life
    im sick of these words
    that tear me up inside
    all these stupid love songs
    they are a load of shit
    thats why im writing this
    to tell the truth about how you make me feel
    how i cry my self to sleep
    believeing your love for me is real
    i cant stand to see you
    or even hear your name
    the thought of you loving me
    makes me go insane
    i wish i never met you
    you fucked up my life
    so many times ive wanted to run away
    to many times uve asked me to stay
    never again will i feel this way
    At night I wonder what I did to deserve all this pain
    I was always told that karma comes around
    And people pay for their mistakes
    But this aint fair because im always hurtin
    Have I done something wrong have I misbehaved
    Coz my life is never right and Ur always to blame
    I wish things were different I wish we never met
    My life might have been perfect without you here
    But I will neva know
    Donít u think its funni how things can be soo right
    But one lil word can ruin so many lives
    No one ever knows how much people mean to them
    And they live their life hoping to see their face the next day







    Submitted on 2006-09-27 22:57:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      damn gal.. thank god i'm not tha one that [censored]ed ya ova... it's a good write... keep it up
    lizzie
    | Posted on 2006-09-28 00:00:00 | by angeldust | [ Reply to This ]


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