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    dots Submission Name: *Clinging To What Used To Bedots
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    Author: Caotic_Disaster
    ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 447/349/148
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dots*Clinging To What Used To Bedots
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    Once it was love, now hate
    What makes us change moods so quickly?
    Why do we do these things to each other?
    Lying, cheating, betraying and accusing.
    It's all we ever do anymore.
    Fighting and arguing.
    Throwing words and insults back in forth.
    Putting ourselves in more misery than is needed.
    Suffering until one of us gets the nerve to abolish what used to be a relationship.




    Submitted on 2006-09-28 15:07:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow this is a great and truthfull poem. everyone trys to thin of some complicated concept but you seem to ask a simple question and made ur point beautifully

    much LOVE
    James
    | Posted on 2006-09-28 00:00:00 | by James Reyna | [ Reply to This ]


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