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    dots Submission Name: Waltz of Deathdots
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    Author: Mr. Creep
    ASL Info:    16. Female. Here
    Elite Ratio:    1.97 - 96/177/112
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 1091
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 648



    Description:
       He dident know who I was


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    dotsWaltz of Deathdots
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    Grasp my heart with softly spoken words,
    take my life away.
    Dance with me underneath the moon,
    for I'll be dead by day.

    Sing to me a lullaby,
    one that reaks of death.
    Whisper words of love to me,
    Before I take my final breath.

    I wish we could fly through the clouds,
    with eyes filled with bliss.
    I want your arms around me tight,
    I want your restless kiss.

    In my dreams this is how it ends,
    to me never is to long.
    Problem is tomorrow I could die,
    and you would'nt notice I was gone...






    Submitted on 2006-09-28 19:40:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The only thing I can say about this piece besides WOW is that you have two misspelled words. wouldnt doesnt have an e in it, and tomorrow has two r's. other than that, this has been one of the best i have seen on here. i absoluetly love it!
    | Posted on 2006-10-04 00:00:00 | by Emo_Doll | [ Reply to This ]
      Holy [censored] man that is sick (meaning it's awesome) Where did you get your inspiration?

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    | Posted on 2006-09-30 00:00:00 | by FreeBird | [ Reply to This ]


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