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Waltz of Death

Author: Mr. Creep
ASL Info:    16. Female. Here
Elite Ratio:    1.97 - 96 /177 /112
Words: 103
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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He dident know who I was

Waltz of Death

Grasp my heart with softly spoken words,
take my life away.
Dance with me underneath the moon,
for I'll be dead by day.

Sing to me a lullaby,
one that reaks of death.
Whisper words of love to me,
Before I take my final breath.

I wish we could fly through the clouds,
with eyes filled with bliss.
I want your arms around me tight,
I want your restless kiss.

In my dreams this is how it ends,
to me never is to long.
Problem is tomorrow I could die,
and you would'nt notice I was gone...

Submitted on 2006-09-28 19:40:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  The only thing I can say about this piece besides WOW is that you have two misspelled words. wouldnt doesnt have an e in it, and tomorrow has two r's. other than that, this has been one of the best i have seen on here. i absoluetly love it!
| Posted on 2006-10-04 00:00:00 | by Emo_Doll | [ Reply to This ]
  Holy [censored] man that is sick (meaning it's awesome) Where did you get your inspiration?

| Posted on 2006-09-30 00:00:00 | by FreeBird | [ Reply to This ]

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