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    dots Submission Name: High Heightsdots
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    Author: SinCeer05
    ASL Info:    21mVA
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 243/279/168
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 206
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 825



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    dotsHigh Heightsdots
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    my thoughts stream with no motive, as I stare into the parody of a screen
    images cast into thoughts, as I wearily dream
    frozen with sculpted ideas to break down and scream
    like the sound of steam, floats from my pores
    darkness around leans like a broken door
    been through angst with empathy towards, hoping for more
    emotional bursts like a thirst for a relative feeling
    no relative or being, will stop the actions of my path like a hearse
    fell to give what im seeing, reactions to a wrath I’m believing, what is worse?
    you do the math an decipher this class of ambiguity
    ciphers of alliteration, keep my heart racing like bigotry
    keys typed, when im free to write calligraphy
    in text the context reaches high heights so poignantly




    Submitted on 2006-09-29 05:42:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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