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    dots Submission Name: Raindots
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    Author: Lavender
    ASL Info:    20/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 101/125/59
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 665
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 334



    Description:
       7th grade poem. Enjoy..


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    dotsRaindots
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    I looked out the window.
    Nothing but rain, rain, rain.
    I finally yelled, "Oh!"
    Because the weather did change.
    Out came the shining sun,
    making the dew glisten.
    It was time to have fun!
    No more dark, gloomy den!
    But when I went outside,
    the rain had fell again.




    Submitted on 2006-09-29 20:20:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      it's different. I must say I do like it more than "W"...no offence. I like the whole concept. But I love the rain, and I woulda gone out laid in it
    | Posted on 2006-09-29 00:00:00 | by Apple-Man | [ Reply to This ]


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