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    dots Submission Name: You don't know medots
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    Author: FreeBird
    ASL Info:    16/m/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.7 - 32/34/25
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 761
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 775



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    dotsYou don't know medots
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    Don't talk about me like you know me
    or I'll drop you where you stand
    Don't tell me I don't know love
    or your face will feel my hand
    Stop with your criticism
    I can't take it anymore
    You'll never see my face again
    I'm waling out the door
    Why won't you get away from me
    Please just leave me alone
    I'm running away from you
    and I'm never going home
    Quit making fun of me
    Quit calling me a freak
    Just because I'm not like you
    because I'm special and unique
    So what if I don't act like you
    I'm not trying to be cool
    If you hurt me because I'm different
    then you are a fool




    Submitted on 2006-09-30 11:19:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i love this! the message is loud and clear. i'm glad you know you're special and unique. too many ppl try to be something they're not, just to fit in, and in your words, that makes them fools.
    excellent job on this one,
    whirl**
    | Posted on 2006-10-02 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
      I love it it makes a lot of sense. Everyone should be their own person. its awesome. keep it rockin'

    _*denny x3
    | Posted on 2006-10-02 00:00:00 | by given_belief | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it, and I can understand it too. only thing I would of changed is the last line. Great write though.
    | Posted on 2006-09-30 00:00:00 | by Apple-Man | [ Reply to This ]
       I like this in a strange way, when you first look at it you expect it not to have a nice flow. But every words just grips me.

    A well deserved 10/10

    Loved every word!
    | Posted on 2006-09-30 00:00:00 | by welshgirlmaddy | [ Reply to This ]


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