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    dots Submission Name: If you and I...dots
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    Author: darkwiccan14
    Elite Ratio:    1.6 - 125/125/88
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Love
    Total Views: 804
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       uhhhh...i was inspired by a friend who had just gotten their heart broken :(


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsIf you and I...dots
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    If I loved you,
    Would you love me?

    If I hated you,
    would you hate me?


    If you loved me,
    but I no longer loved you,
    would you still love me?

    If you hated me,
    and I loved you,
    would you still hate me?

    Only if,
    I really knew...




    Submitted on 2006-09-30 16:58:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this is really good emotion
    | Posted on 2006-10-04 00:00:00 | by BrOkEn4gOoD | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice one. Thoughts are clearly expressed.
    I liked it. :)
    | Posted on 2006-10-01 00:00:00 | by Piper | [ Reply to This ]
      This one really spoke to me. I feel the same way sometimes.
    | Posted on 2006-09-30 00:00:00 | by FreeBird | [ Reply to This ]


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