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    dots Submission Name: Cupcakes!!dots
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    Author: darkwiccan14
    Elite Ratio:    1.6 - 125/125/88
    Words: 26
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Comedy
    Total Views: 556
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    Description:
       i was eating a cupcake so i decided to be weird and make another "poem" about food! lol


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    dotsCupcakes!!dots
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    Cupcakes!!
    Delicious when the topping isn't fake!
    Cupcakes!Cupcakes!
    Something that doesn't Flake!
    Cupcakes,Cupcakes, CUPCAKES!
    Cupcakes the one and the only treat that everyone loves to eat!




    Submitted on 2006-09-30 17:48:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      just saying CUPCAKES! makes you want one!
    | Posted on 2006-12-09 00:00:00 | by Anz | [ Reply to This ]
      mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm cupcakes
    | Posted on 2006-11-16 00:00:00 | by elseibi | [ Reply to This ]
      haha this is great cupcakes are great your wright they are not so great though when the topping isn't real. any way you know that buttercreme icing that stuff is awesome im gonna go eat a cupcake bye
    Apryk
    | Posted on 2006-11-04 00:00:00 | by Apryk | [ Reply to This ]
      ME TOO!!!! ^_^
    | Posted on 2006-10-04 00:00:00 | by darkwiccan14 | [ Reply to This ]
      OMG I LOVE CUPCAKES!!!!!!!!
    | Posted on 2006-09-30 00:00:00 | by FreeBird | [ Reply to This ]


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