Abused
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I thought I did pretty good with the rhyming in this one, but let me know what you think. I wrote this one a long time ago.
I've never been physically abused by my parents. I'm lucky compared to a bunch of other children out there.
This goes to all those poor kids who are afraid to speak up. My heart goes out to them.
I've never been physically abused by my parents. I'm lucky compared to a bunch of other children out there.
This goes to all those poor kids who are afraid to speak up. My heart goes out to them.
Abused
Fear crosses over her face she runs trying to find a hiding place but he is too fast for her little legs he grabs her from behind, ignoring her begs she cries aloud, but no one hears it's been the same routine for so many years yet she's still afraid of what he will do by tomorrow she'll be all black and blue tears escape her eyes, and roll down her cheeks she becomes too tired, she becomes too weak he throws her across the room, into a wall nothing is there to break her fall another injury she'll have to hide and another secret she'll keep inside there is no way out, she's in to deep maybe he'll hit her too hard, and she'll fall asleep and hopefully she'll never wake again then her living nightmare will come to an end |
Submitted on 2006-09-30 23:29:29 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Very well written. I imagine that you have a close experience with this to have written it so well and I can feel the pain that is expressed throughout...I am sorry for your pain and as a survivor i can only say never give up hope and there is help out there even though it is as scary as hell...for you or whomever it is that is going through this...keep writing...you write well and no doubt it helps....stormy| | Posted on 2006-10-02 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ] | This is one of the best writes on abuse I have read yet | Your words carry all the emotion and fear a little child running away from abuse would be feeling Im telling you I became so angry and physically sick reading this Why do parents have children if all they are going to do is treat them like a punchimg back I will never ever understand this And Please dont even get me started on all the other forms of abuse sick and demented parents give to their children iTS SO SICK!!!! Society has to do something and do something quick about this problem Why do they think more teens are commiting suicide and are more depressed then ever I am making this write a favorite For much more reasons then one I hope I can help you help other people read this important write and people can realize just how hurtful and harming Child Abuse truly is God Bless Ron | Posted on 2006-10-01 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ] | |
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