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    dots Submission Name: Too late? (Perfect Castle)dots
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    Author: dado
    ASL Info:    22/m/uk
    Elite Ratio:    2.83 - 25/29/9
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 90
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 702



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       I'd be interested to see what people think this poem is about. Its' the first I've written in ages and the style's pretty different from anything I've done before.


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    dotsToo late? (Perfect Castle)dots
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    The perfect castle free of mould
    Now broken down as ties grow old
    Out in the sun with time to dry
    Sand held so tight now slips by

    First washed away in Denial's seas
    Taken further yet by Reality's breeze
    Beaches comfort, ease the pain
    Yet offer not a similar grain

    Late desperation trys to rebuild
    Pack a void needing to be filled
    Restoration must be careful, slow
    Avoid damage to foundations below

    Unsteady hands will cause a fall
    Only in joint can it stand tall
    One last gamble to restore
    A castle to what it was and more








    Submitted on 2006-10-01 15:31:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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