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    dots Submission Name: For Johnathondots
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    Author: Poeticprincess
    ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333/325/104
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 689
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       a closed chapter in my life i think


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    dotsFor Johnathondots
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    I can never erase how much I love you
    Everything weve done
    Everything weve been through
    The hurt the pain
    You stuck by my side
    I was your girl
    Who was always down to ride
    But I guess you got tired
    Of me being so young
    Not even that mostly
    Of me being so dumb
    Because you up and left
    With out so much of a goodbye
    But to say I hate you
    Would be too much of a lie
    My first love
    The first person to which I gave my heart
    All happiness
    And the pain weve been through
    One day when we see each other
    Well remember the past
    And Ill also be stuck remembering
    Good things dont always last




    Submitted on 2006-10-01 17:50:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      For being so young you sure no how to write!!! This is one of the better poems on this site! And I have read a lot of them. Great write and I hope everything is alright for now?
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2006-10-25 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]


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