For Johnathon

Author: Poeticprincess ASL Info:    18/f/Germany Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333 /325 /104 Words: 123

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For Johnathon

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I can never erase how much I love you Everything we’ve done Everything we’ve been through The hurt the pain You stuck by my side I was your girl Who was always down to ride But I guess you got tired Of me being so young Not even that mostly Of me being so dumb Because you up and left With out so much of a goodbye But to say I hate you Would be too much of a lie My first love The first person to which I gave my heart All happiness And the pain we’ve been through One day when we see each other We’ll remember the past And I’ll also be stuck remembering Good things don’t always last

Submitted on 2006-10-01 17:50:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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For being so young you sure no how to write!!! This is one of the better poems on this site! And I have read a lot of them. Great write and I hope everything is alright for now? Kelley Frost

| Posted on 2006-10-25 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]

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