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Submission Name: For Johnathon dots

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Author:	Poeticprincess
ASL Info:	18/f/Germany
Elite Ratio:	3.3 - 333/325/104
Words:	123

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	686
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	747

Description:
a closed chapter in my life i think

For Johnathon dots

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I can never erase how much I love you
Everything we’ve done
Everything we’ve been through
The hurt the pain
You stuck by my side
I was your girl
Who was always down to ride
But I guess you got tired
Of me being so young
Not even that mostly
Of me being so dumb
Because you up and left
With out so much of a goodbye
But to say I hate you
Would be too much of a lie
My first love
The first person to which I gave my heart
All happiness
And the pain we’ve been through
One day when we see each other
We’ll remember the past
And I’ll also be stuck remembering
Good things don’t always last

Submitted on 2006-10-01 17:50:32 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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For being so young you sure no how to write!!! This is one of the better poems on this site! And I have read a lot of them. Great write and I hope everything is alright for now?
Kelley Frost
| Posted on 2006-10-25 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]

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