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A roundabout

Author: Sagirlie
ASL Info:    16/F/Essex
Elite Ratio:    4.83 - 48 /39 /24
Words: 75
Class/Type: Random Thoughts /Misc
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Random I know, it's not that good, I just wrote it as I went along, it's a pretty accurate summary of my outlook on life.

A roundabout

A rollercoaster has ups and downs
Twists and turns
It passes in a blur of adrenaline and fear
You scream, you laugh, it ends

My life isn't a rollercoaster
It's a roundabout
Slow, steady
Sometimes I get a beautiful view
Sometimes I lose sight of things
But my roundabout doesn't stop
It keeps turning
Slowly, surely
But not predictable
Because I never know
How the scenery may have changed
Next time I go round

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