A roundabout

Author: Sagirlie ASL Info:    16/F/Essex Elite Ratio:    4.83 - 48 /39 /24 Words: 75

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A roundabout

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A rollercoaster has ups and downs Twists and turns It passes in a blur of adrenaline and fear You scream, you laugh, it ends My life isn't a rollercoaster It's a roundabout Slow, steady Sometimes I get a beautiful view Sometimes I lose sight of things But my roundabout doesn't stop It keeps turning Slowly, surely But not predictable Because I never know How the scenery may have changed Next time I go round

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