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    dots Submission Name: i love youdots
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    Author: BrOkEn4gOoD
    ASL Info:    17/f/queens
    Elite Ratio:    2.82 - 20/12/14
    Words: 185
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 80
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    Bytes: 858



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    dotsi love youdots
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    why do i love you if i only get your love half the time why is it when im hurt you think everything is fine times i need you the most it seems like your never there even when we touch you dont even care is it normal to feel my heart breaking was it true love or for all this time youve been faking i wish i can be your world the only thing you could ever want but i guess my mind mistakes you for something that your not people think im stupid but i dont think i could ever leave you my heart just wont do it love is blind its killing me inside for everytime we fight i dont know why but your all i think of when i cry i know im stupid for waiting until you completly break my heart but when you do maybe you will realize how much you need me why do i cry over you your just a guy i know how i try to convince myself but for some reason it still hurts inside




    Submitted on 2006-10-01 20:46:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i really like this. it seems as though you have a lot of feelings for this person. Its really good. Keep writing!!! Keeps it rockin'

    _*denny x3
    | Posted on 2006-10-05 00:00:00 | by given_belief | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, this is heartbreaking. you are so in love you just cannot let go, even though he seems so aloof and uncaring. again, you are very descriptive of your feelings. i like raw emotion, and this is what you created here.
    good write,
    whirl**
    | Posted on 2006-10-02 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]



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