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    dots Submission Name: suicides notedots
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    Author: BrOkEn4gOoD
    ASL Info:    17/f/queens
    Elite Ratio:    2.82 - 20/12/14
    Words: 177
    Class/Type: Poetry/Fuck it all
    Total Views: 108
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 924



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    There is blood on the floor and blood on her arms her wrists are slit and so is her heart she tried to breath but there was no air left she died a slow terribly death

    her parents downstairs didn't hear a sound she had the music blasting with fear all around she wrote a fair well letter to the people she once despised to let them know she died because of the rumors they confined

    her parents found her lying dead on the floor the next day as she wrote to the people they will pay people didn't like her in school she was a geek everybody would push her around

    every night she would cry so she just couldn't take it anymore she thought it was her turn to die she had nobody to talk to nobody was ever real they were a lie

    her parents were never there for her they did not care she just had build her problems inside of her and they just laid there




    Submitted on 2006-10-01 21:38:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Do you think that anyone really cares if someone dies, or do you think they're told they have to?

    Oh, I like your poem.
    | Posted on 2006-10-10 00:00:00 | by Gothic Misery | [ Reply to This ]



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