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Love.... love...

Author: Black-Death
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Love.... love...

As your body swayed with myn.. as i held you tighter... as you griped my arms holding them never whating to let go.. as we both looked out to the sunset.. as we both are standing in here.. are love around us.. my love for you.. your love for me... i wisper in your ear i love you.. you instantly melt in my arms blushing.. crying tears of joy... you look up at me... i kiss your lips... you kiss me back... now where sitting down watching each other... because the sunset is no longer as butifull as you.... i relize in my mind... where both theafs because iv stolen your heart... and youv stolen myn..

Submitted on 2006-10-01 21:41:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Very deep, only thing is the spelling. I'm not a grammar nazi, but it wouldn't hurt to put the extra shine on your work.
| Posted on 2006-10-03 00:00:00 | by Nihilist Weasel | [ Reply to This ]

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