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    dots Submission Name: Lick my Balls Ass Fuckersdots
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    Author: Ratmeat
    ASL Info:    25/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 200/222/61
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 210
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 633



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    dotsLick my Balls Ass Fuckersdots
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    Gigantic sexual perspirators
    Huffing homosexual umpires
    You can't win
    In the game of stupid
    Life likes to lick your balls
    Butt that's all
    Nothing more
    It's a big squirmish
    Slightly uncomfortable
    Yet delightfull experiance
    In the world of cock faces
    You are the ultimate strap
    Forced to bind
    And prevent jostleation.
    You are a marshmallow duck
    Swimming in a pond of milk
    Every other asshole swimming around you
    Is a fucking Cheerio
    And God is about to munch you
    For Breakfast




    Submitted on 2006-10-02 00:10:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Not bad. Not great. but not bad. I'd have to agree the cheerio part is the best part...but the rest is boarderline angsty for me, plus I'm not really sure what the angers directed at...it's hard to really pin point...or I'm just a pretentious dick...I don't know.
    | Posted on 2006-11-09 00:00:00 | by R.Milkbone | [ Reply to This ]
      Dude,

    Your a marshmallow duck
    Swimming in a pond of milk
    Every other [censored] swimming around you
    Is a [censored] Cheerio


    . . . is just [censored] classic. I mean that's great. So delightful I'm gonna do the unthinkable and make this one a favorite.

    | Posted on 2006-11-08 00:00:00 | by Vancrown | [ Reply to This ]



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