Not bad, even for those who cannot find themselve drifting off into the setting of any writing, it is forced upon you anyway. Very descriptive and excellently worded. Slightly monotonous but I dig it regardless
first view, first comment. cool. Ok. I like this, it has reference to things i understand( i think). You speak of Neptune, Mythological Roman God of the sea. Equivalent of Poseiden. its good though. keep it up.