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    dots Submission Name: My Angeldots
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    Author: Anju
    ASL Info:    25/f/India
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 24/27/15
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsMy Angeldots
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    I see the Golden beauty of fire
    And leans to touch it wit hands bare;
    Pulls me back a voice in me,
    A spirit of love with Angels' speech-
    "Just think of me before you venture,
    And I'll guide you with care, out of danger."
    I gaze within me to search for the spirit,
    And finds within me your caring soul.
    I realize that moment- we are not two,
    You are myself, My Guardian Angel,
    Whom I call my mother, My World!!!




    Submitted on 2006-10-02 13:32:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Whoa, it sounds like you care about this person a lot. The same as they care for you. Good peice keep it rockin'

    _*denny x3
    | Posted on 2006-10-02 00:00:00 | by given_belief | [ Reply to This ]
      i wsh i could feel that way for my mother... well, i could but then id only be an idiot for letting her get away with it. im glad you have a nice home life. not many people do. keep posting. this is a wreat write

    tina
    | Posted on 2006-10-02 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]


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