Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: My Angeldots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Anju
    ASL Info:    25/f/India
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 24/27/15
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 602
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 508



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsMy Angeldots
    -------------------------------------------


    I see the Golden beauty of fire
    And leans to touch it wit hands bare;
    Pulls me back a voice in me,
    A spirit of love with Angels' speech-
    "Just think of me before you venture,
    And I'll guide you with care, out of danger."
    I gaze within me to search for the spirit,
    And finds within me your caring soul.
    I realize that moment- we are not two,
    You are myself, My Guardian Angel,
    Whom I call my mother, My World!!!




    Submitted on 2006-10-02 13:32:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Whoa, it sounds like you care about this person a lot. The same as they care for you. Good peice keep it rockin'

    _*denny x3
    | Posted on 2006-10-02 00:00:00 | by given_belief | [ Reply to This ]
      i wsh i could feel that way for my mother... well, i could but then id only be an idiot for letting her get away with it. im glad you have a nice home life. not many people do. keep posting. this is a wreat write

    tina
    | Posted on 2006-10-02 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    120292

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    May 31 2018 written by Chelebel
    Munyonyo written by expiring_touch
    Be Free written by hybridsongwrite
    Song written by Daniel Barlow
    Trails written by Daniel Barlow
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    Transparent written by Daniel Barlow
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    Wavelength written by saartha
    The Promise written by annie0888
    Incubus written by monad
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    This written by Chelebel
    You Make Me speechless written by elephantasia
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    Wasps written by Wolfwatching
    To written by SavedDragon
    In the Mouth of Elysium written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    It's been a while written by Sharati_hottie
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    Deaf Dumb and Blind is no excuse written by poetotoe
    Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Love Can Be... written by HAVENSMITH92
    Hopelessly Blind written by ForgottenGraves
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    One Thing written by Wolfwatching

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry