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    dots Submission Name: **Burrying Todaydots

    Author: Caotic_Disaster
    ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 447/349/148
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       umm....i wrote this basically in an msn conversation....well bits and pieces of..decided it would make a good poem..so here it is

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    dots**Burrying Todaydots

    We can now move on with our lives.
    Tomorrow this epiphany will be long gone,
    And happiness will surround us,
    But if happiness fails to proceed
    We shall pretend happiness surrounds us.
    But all bitterness will be forbidden
    From the very air we breath.
    Smiles will plaster our once melancholy faces.
    And joyous laughter will be the sound of once bickering mouths.

    Submitted on 2006-10-02 16:43:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This write I truly like a lot
    This write speaks a great fact
    When one is down and out or feeling depressed just look back on some of the things that have happenend in your life and they once again will create happiness
    This is how I defeat the Negativity that trys to bring me down every day
    And it is a way of life for me
    Trust me it works beautifully
    Great Write
    God Bless
    | Posted on 2006-10-02 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      i like it. its really good. i read this because you had posted it in the cht room. nice work. keep it up. you are a great writer.
    | Posted on 2006-10-02 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]

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