i won't fight for you

Author: Amberger ASL Info:    13/f/earth Elite Ratio:    1.9 - 49 /85 /24 Words: 116

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i won't fight for you

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Don't think that I can't see it When your looking at her It doesn't take a genius to know That i wanna feel love when i'm around you I wouldn't give up unless i found you In the arms of someone else I wanna feel love for a minute Don't wanna be taken to the limit But it feels like you keep pushing me there Don't think that your better than that Don't even think your the only one on my map I know it's cool when you're there If your playing a game then your not my type I swear I won't fight for you if your like that

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| Posted on 2007-06-14 00:00:00 | by DonkeyMan | [ Reply to This ]

uhmmmmmmmmmmm...no words actually. I really don't know what to say besides: inside and out that is my life nice job, and thank you ~Midnight Shadow~

| Posted on 2007-02-09 00:00:00 | by Midnight Shadow | [ Reply to This ]

That was so awsome Amber very heart felt and very very real I love the reality of this poem and even though you didn't rhyme alot in this poem the feeling and emotion and reality of this great . You know this is the first poem that I have commented in a long time , and the fact that this is going to be one of my favs is amazing I agree with caotic that this is probably one of your best works I am extremely impressed and proud of you much LOVE James

| Posted on 2007-01-22 00:00:00 | by James Reyna | [ Reply to This ]

Why fight for someone who isn’t worthy? and what is love good for when you can’t feel it ?..When you ask these questions you’re surely pushed beyond the limits. I’ve read half of the poems you’ve written...and this is the best one. Keep it up ~~Drakoniss~~

| Posted on 2006-11-03 00:00:00 | by drakoniss | [ Reply to This ]

Amberger I have reads this once before every time I do it impresses me more this is very grown up Amberger I'm impressed this is a very special veres I'll keep this short by saying THANK YOU

| Posted on 2006-10-05 00:00:00 | by moggy | [ Reply to This ]

Not a bad work....it's just a little confusing...your feelings aren't expressed extraordinarily clear....and for you type of writing that is crucial...getting the point across to the reader...why write a poem for someone you don't like that much as to fight for? Or is it a kind of tease. Anyhow, it's you're, not your(you're looking at her-as in you are). Peace. Angie

| Posted on 2006-10-05 00:00:00 | by Angie444 | [ Reply to This ]

Nice, I really think you got your point across to the reader so...yeah. I'm going to review your other one, in a min. *_* Twisted

| Posted on 2006-10-04 00:00:00 | by Twisted | [ Reply to This ]

Awesome job. THat is definetly like your best. Awesome job amber. ~Caotic~

| Posted on 2006-10-02 00:00:00 | by Caotic_Disaster | [ Reply to This ]

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