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This neat little ege

Author: Black-Death
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Words: 101
Class/Type: Misc /Angry
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Angry.... This is true im going to fuck this kid up this Long weekend October 2nd 2006 is the date

This neat little ege

Im going to have a fun time falling over this edge... Gona have fun mixing the blood and the alchol, With anger..Im going to have fun Beating in your face Im going to have fun while the people try and pull me off Im going to have fun you while u BEG FOR YOUR LIFE...But i wont stop. i have no reason to. Only reason is gone. Because all this pain... is caused from you....Only hope is Wasted on me. Only... Love.... The love you took...The people you hurt... The things you've done.. You... Shall pay By my fist..

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  Angry obviously but in a way I think I'm attracted to your writting. Its like a car reck that you can't look away from. I know how this can feel and It dose help when I write. Unfortunatly I've never had someone break from me. In a way your lucky. You loved and lost and I just gave up because of fear of being left.

| Posted on 2006-10-09 00:00:00 | by SarahE.P. | [ Reply to This ]

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