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    dots Submission Name: Passiondots
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    Author: Poetic Ways
    Elite Ratio:    1.31 - 9/24/26
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsPassiondots
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    It all starts out with just a passionate kiss,
    An energy of pure sensuality mixed with bliss,
    A slow pace to start off with the lights low,
    A paradise of romance on beat with the flow,
    An increase in the intimacy a warm feeling,
    A caress of the skin the rest soon to be revealing,
    Affection is in the air a very sensual atmosphere,
    Another caress only this time a touch of her hair,
    The tables turn the mood becomes hot & wild,
    The passionate moans turn into cries so loud,
    Cries of utter joy coming from the lovers mouth,
    A change in the trip as the head starts south,
    A steamy battle between a moist tongue and drenched clit,
    The juices being swallowed to the maximum none left to spit,
    To Be Continued:




    Submitted on 2006-10-02 21:00:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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