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Author: Poetic Ways
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Words: 140
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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It all starts out with just a passionate kiss,
An energy of pure sensuality mixed with bliss,
A slow pace to start off with the lights low,
A paradise of romance on beat with the flow,
An increase in the intimacy a warm feeling,
A caress of the skin the rest soon to be revealing,
Affection is in the air a very sensual atmosphere,
Another caress only this time a touch of her hair,
The tables turn the mood becomes hot & wild,
The passionate moans turn into cries so loud,
Cries of utter joy coming from the lovers mouth,
A change in the trip as the head starts south,
A steamy battle between a moist tongue and drenched clit,
The juices being swallowed to the maximum none left to spit,
To Be Continued:

Submitted on 2006-10-02 21:00:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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