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    dots Submission Name: Be Minedots
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    Author: Poetic Ways
    Elite Ratio:    1.31 - 9/24/26
    Words: 156
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsBe Minedots
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    This day dedicated to love something i feel strongly for you
    Our hands lock I whisper into your ear, this love I feel is true

    The essence of your beauty, something like a bouquet of perfect flowers
    Our eyes meet gratefully I stare into yours for what seems like endless hours

    I run my hand down your face, speechless, but you see in my eyes how much i care,
    Our lips touch a feeling of love is felt, as a passionate kiss is what we share,

    I hold you close to my body with such a grip, you know I plan to never let go
    Words are not enough to express how much I love you, It's to much for me to show

    So I ask you my Beautiful Girl on this day called Valentine
    Will you take my hand my kiss my love, Will you always be mine




    Submitted on 2006-10-02 21:04:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    | Posted on 2006-10-03 00:00:00 | by Mythicalfrog | [ Reply to This ]


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