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    dots Submission Name: Incredible minddots
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    Author: Poetic Ways
    Elite Ratio:    1.31 - 9/24/26
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsIncredible minddots
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    An incredible mind indeed, never being wasted
    But this mind is incredibly diseased, not to be tasted

    Wrongful decisions made with no thought or hesitation
    Hoping only to see the poison, I pray for devestation

    I see good in evil labled as the Devils slave
    This black heart, hiding inside a dark cave

    With this infected blood bringing acts of vengeance
    Leaving minds in terror hearts in grievance

    With malicious intentions I hurt when pain doesn't exsist
    Thinking thoughts of dreams, Nightmares are being wished

    Displaying agony in my head, this is a struggle I need
    The blood drips of my face for tears are what i bleed




    Submitted on 2006-10-02 21:06:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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