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Incredible mind

Author: Poetic Ways
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Incredible mind

An incredible mind indeed, never being wasted
But this mind is incredibly diseased, not to be tasted

Wrongful decisions made with no thought or hesitation
Hoping only to see the poison, I pray for devestation

I see good in evil labled as the Devils slave
This black heart, hiding inside a dark cave

With this infected blood bringing acts of vengeance
Leaving minds in terror hearts in grievance

With malicious intentions I hurt when pain doesn't exsist
Thinking thoughts of dreams, Nightmares are being wished

Displaying agony in my head, this is a struggle I need
The blood drips of my face for tears are what i bleed

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