Let Go

Author: Beseechingly ASL Info:    23/F/USA Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 1 /3 /12 Words: 117

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Let Go

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I don't expect you to save me but I wouldn't reject a night spent in your arms to make me feel more alive you make it slightly less tempting to let myself die but I know lust for death would return as soon as you left me and every silent, protected beat of my heart will mourn that loss will regret the moment you let me go and regret the moment I let you hold me pretending all the while that I am untouchable that I prefer to be alone that I don't mind being lonely but you're so deep inside that I hardly feel it when you touch me only when you let go

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