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Bleed young Heart, Bleed


Author: Poetic Ways
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Bleed young Heart, Bleed



I made the choice and I made the pain,
I did what I could for your love to gain,
Now all I can hear is, bleed young heart bleed,

I lost you once fate made me get you back,
I've lost you again, this is motivation I lack,
Now all I can hear is, bleed young heart bleed,

Feel one thing but yet i do another explain that,
Follow your heart not your mind, where's my heart at,
Now all i can hear is, bleed young heart bleed,

A scent has become enough to make me cry,
My tears are enough to make me unable to try,
Now all I can hear is, bleed young heart bleed,

A lonley night and an empty feeling inside,
A lonley heart an empty mind, I'm choosing to hide,
Now all I can hear is, bleed young heart bleed,

A different person I've become someone I hate,
The world is on my shoulders, I'm collapsing from its weight,
Now all I can hear is, bleed young heart bleed!

change is inevitable i already know this
dreams dont come true becareful what u wish
now all i hear is bleed young heart bleed

pain comes and goes more often it comes
hold it in and pray for the day that it numbs
now all i hear is bleed young heart bleed




Submitted on 2006-10-02 21:29:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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