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    dots Submission Name: Bleed young Heart, Bleeddots
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    Author: Poetic Ways
    Elite Ratio:    1.31 - 9/24/26
    Words: 234
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsBleed young Heart, Bleeddots
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    I made the choice and I made the pain,
    I did what I could for your love to gain,
    Now all I can hear is, bleed young heart bleed,

    I lost you once fate made me get you back,
    I've lost you again, this is motivation I lack,
    Now all I can hear is, bleed young heart bleed,

    Feel one thing but yet i do another explain that,
    Follow your heart not your mind, where's my heart at,
    Now all i can hear is, bleed young heart bleed,

    A scent has become enough to make me cry,
    My tears are enough to make me unable to try,
    Now all I can hear is, bleed young heart bleed,

    A lonley night and an empty feeling inside,
    A lonley heart an empty mind, I'm choosing to hide,
    Now all I can hear is, bleed young heart bleed,

    A different person I've become someone I hate,
    The world is on my shoulders, I'm collapsing from its weight,
    Now all I can hear is, bleed young heart bleed!

    change is inevitable i already know this
    dreams dont come true becareful what u wish
    now all i hear is bleed young heart bleed

    pain comes and goes more often it comes
    hold it in and pray for the day that it numbs
    now all i hear is bleed young heart bleed




    Submitted on 2006-10-02 21:29:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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