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    dots Submission Name: Why Do I?dots

    Author: Poetic Ways
    Elite Ratio:    1.31 - 9/24/26
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    dotsWhy Do I?dots

    why do i always get this mentle state of mind at night
    why do i tell myself lets pray we dont see another day of light
    why do i lie and tell myself everything will be just fine
    why do i feel it never will in my heart and in my mind
    why do i feel the need to hide and stash my pain
    why do i feel as though one day things will be the same
    why do i also feel that things will just keep getting worse
    why do i even feel at all when day by day it makes me hurt
    why do i let my gaurd down but immediatley its right back
    why do i face the lie and brush away all of the facts
    why do i put myself out there just to be shut right back down
    why do i bother to smile when on the inside is a frown
    why do i try why do i care why do i allow myself to feel this way
    ill tell you why and its so i dont end up like you one day!

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