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    dots Submission Name: Finally thrudots
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    Author: Poetic Ways
    Elite Ratio:    1.31 - 9/24/26
    Words: 259
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    dotsFinally thrudots
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    I've told myself way too many times that I was done trying,
    If this was love then that part is way pass done dying,
    I'm pass crying,
    I'm pass waiting,
    I'm pass debating if i should keep trying or if what we had is pass disintegrating,
    Moments at times everything seems perfect,
    The rest of the time I'm questioning is this worth it,
    It's hard to give up It's hard to let it go,
    Actions speak louder than words and you allow niether to show,
    I've been patient, But my patience is long gone,
    But I'm strong, So thats why I've held on,
    For so long,
    But from now on,
    My efforts will be kept at a minimum if not none,
    Is she the one?
    After all my pains I still dont want this to be done,
    I've been thru hell, A place full of misery and agony,
    Me and you forever thats what i want it so bad to be,
    But that can't be,
    But it has to be,
    Filling my head with faith, Call it false hopes,
    Dreams with no chance of coming true are what you spoke,
    The pain it hurts more than any physical injury,
    Cause my hearts broken, look what you did to me,
    You injured me,
    You injured my love for you and all that it contains,
    And the rain, wont go away and the feelings just aren't the same...
    So heres a change,
    Heres something thats a little bit new,
    When it comes to me and you,
    Im finally thru!




    Submitted on 2006-10-02 21:33:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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