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Author: Poetic Ways
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I'm tired of trying to get your attention over and over again,
In my head day and night all the time is why i spend,
Endless hours thinking of you and what we may become,
But the endless part is bound to change for my waiting is done,
However I did not get what it was I was after this whole time,
Despite giving up she's still gonna always be on my mind,
They say if it's meant to will be...How can that be true,
Because in my dreams the only girl present is always you,
Hopes and chances only to build up what they plan to break,
Only so much one can take for God's sake The pain is never late,
So here's an idea the games you play shall come to an end,
I never win seeing as how not getting what I want is a familiar trend!

Submitted on 2006-10-02 21:34:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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