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I pray

Author: Poetic Ways
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I pray

To where I begin this path seems long,
To this act of truth i've done no wrong,
Blamed for it all...hated by my surroundings,
Leave this hell the thought seems undoubting,
Lower by love and higher by hate,
Death is calling but I refuse our date,
For now I know my reason has arrived,
Darkness quickly turns to light for I choose to be alive,
I try and show thanks to all who care,
The life I was given I have not one to spare,
I lend my hand to those who need,
I do not follow for I choose to lead,
I get nothing in return theres not alot I ask,
Can't base the future with events from the past,
I refuse to leave and yet cannot stay,
God is too busy to the devil I pray!

Submitted on 2006-10-02 21:36:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| Posted on 2006-10-03 00:00:00 | by Mythicalfrog | [ Reply to This ]

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