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    dots Submission Name: Still Standing Part 2dots
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    Author: kapri49
    ASL Info:    16/f/canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 31/69/30
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Bytes: 599



    Description:
       my ex reappeared..still in love...still waiting for me...


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    dotsStill Standing Part 2dots
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    Why did you come back?
    Why do you still care?
    Why do you still love me?
    And why are u still standing here

    Why do I still dream of you?
    Why do I see yoour face
    When dreaming of my future?
    And why are you still standing here

    I left you..again
    I told for the second time good-bye
    I said you weren't worth the pain
    And still your standing here

    Why won't you quit?
    Just give up on me
    I' break your heart and make you cry
    And still your standing here




    Submitted on 2006-10-02 23:26:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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