Description: To my girls... keepers of my heart... my neverending joy... much love from mom!
You Are Beautiful -------------------------------------------
You are beautiful
You are passionate
You are strong and smart and sweet
You have bright eyes
and a killer smile
You win everyone you meet
You don't take 'no'
and dear I know
you will suffer your share of heartache
But believe in yourself
and hold tight to your dreams
and never let anyone your light take
For you are my angel
My gift from God
Worth more to me than all else
You're special and pure
and always be sure
of the power you have in yourself
The day will come
when my job is done
and you will go your own way
But never forget
you're as good as it gets
and will always in my heart stay
this is a very warm an heartfelt piece. i bet your kids love it. it is a wonderful tribute to them and your amazing love for them. i love the dynamic instructions to offer them. the advice you give them to make it in life. the message is quite potent.
there are some really nice rhymes here as well. in all i think that this write is certainly well written and most needed. it is written eloquently and takes on a whimsical nature as well.
For you are my angel My gift from God Worth more to me than all else You're special and pure and always be sure of the power you have in yourself
this is an incredible herald of love. i commend you on this lovely piece. superb job!!
Nice maternal sentiments - but lacking in depth or complexity. While we all love our children - you could tell us what in particular your's do that really make you smile. THe particular details of how they are different from all the other mother's daughters - who also have "bright eyes and a killer smile". They are special - tell us how they are.
Well it was a bit msuhy like when your mom uses spit to clean your face and your kind of grossed out and embarassed all at once. Overall I enjoyed the rhyme of of mine specialties and I thought it nicely carried the read from start to finish. Anyway not having any kids myself and frankly I still feel like one I can't relate to your roll, but it reminds me of my mom. i'm sure they feel embarrassed by you at time as i am by my mom but Undoubtly they love you. peace.