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    dots Submission Name: Nightmaredots
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    Author: wildriver
    ASL Info:    18/Female/kearney, NE
    Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 13/12/12
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       have you ever been chased by something in your dreams...


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    dotsNightmaredots
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    Shadows seep from its eyes,
    but I am not there.
    I cannot feel
    its icy cold stare.

    Follow me not
    where my dreams do lay;
    for without them my heart
    would not live anyway.

    Let go of my soul.
    let my hair fall free;
    nothing you have
    can take this love from me.

    Somewhere the bell tolls
    half past two;
    and somehow I'm no longer
    frightened of you.




    Submitted on 2006-10-03 14:13:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Dreams can be pretty f*cked-up, especially when they seem real.
    I like this a lot.
    It's so creepy in such a great way
    The descriptions and stuff are wonderful.


    Very nicely done
    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2006-10-09 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
      Ooo chasing dreams. The hardest theing to do is to confront the "monster".....even harder then trying to escape...
    | Posted on 2006-10-03 00:00:00 | by Nihilist Weasel | [ Reply to This ]


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