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Dear John

Author: Fraser
ASL Info:    26
Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 30 /55 /35
Words: 94
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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Dear John

You are a dear friend
you're there when no one cares
a pillar of strength that only i see
please John remember me

Out of the gates you emerge
running fast through the trees
a pleasureable site that i see
please John remember me

talks over coffee and cigarettes
tales of laughter and heriocs
i praise your mind thats what i see
please John remember me

I walk alone now, with shadow cast
the nights are cold and dismal
a warm embrace thats what i see
please John remember me

Submitted on 2006-10-03 16:02:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I thought this was very well structured and executed. The rhyme worked very well for the piece.

Well done.

| Posted on 2006-10-03 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]

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