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    dots Submission Name: A Few Linesdots

    Author: zee_
    Elite Ratio:    0.8 - 0/2/7
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsA Few Linesdots

    Just a few lines to tell you how I feel,
    A few lines to show I care.
    But what good will these few lines do
    If you are never there?
    These words will just be written
    Never noticed or read
    All my feelings down on paper...
    All the thoughts that fill my head.
    Whispered softly to myself
    So no one else can hear
    Only I can see what's written,
    Only I can feel my tears.
    Shutting out the world around me
    Only I can hear my cries,
    Writing my feelings down on paper
    My heart starts to die.
    I'm dying inside
    But no one seems to know,
    I'm trying to hold on...
    But I'm slowly letting go.

    Submitted on 2006-10-03 18:45:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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